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AntoDecay
10-06-2015, 12:26 PM
Hey guys! I made this drawing (with instructions) on illustrator in my graphic class. What should I do to improve it, any ideas?

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Thanks in advance!

-L

Oops (sorry it's side ways)

Solorien
10-06-2015, 01:05 PM
Ooh! He's adorable! I like how the roundness of his body is echoed in his legs, arms, and horns. And how it contrasts with the sharp triangle trees in the background. The colors work well together. not much I see that I would suggest changing. His hair maybe?? But I'm not sure how. It just doesn't match the "very round" style of the rest of him. Nicely done. I'm a fan of inflatable animals. :)

AntoDecay
10-06-2015, 02:33 PM
Ooh! He's adorable! I like how the roundness of his body is echoed in his legs, arms, and horns. And how it contrasts with the sharp triangle trees in the background. The colors work well together. not much I see that I would suggest changing. His hair maybe?? But I'm not sure how. It just doesn't match the "very round" style of the rest of him. Nicely done. I'm a fan of inflatable animals. :)

Glad you liked it! hmm, i'll see if I can do something with the hair...

Block Of Dirt
10-14-2015, 06:11 PM
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It's perfect
What software do you use?