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GummiBear64
12-23-2015, 06:47 AM
Howdy folks, if y'all want to read my creative, original, terrible story then I'll post all the links here, okie dokie.
You can ask me questions, compliment it, trash talk it, call it terrible, abuse me or even abuse the story.

Part 1 – Hiro (http://www.rtsoft.com/forums/showthread.php?288840-The-Odd-Bunch-STORY-Part-1&highlight=bunch)

Part 2 - Lilybelle (http://www.rtsoft.com/forums/showthread.php?289270-The-Odd-Bunch-STORY-Part-2)

Part 3 - Alexandra (http://www.rtsoft.com/forums/showthread.php?289726-The-Odd-Bunch-Part-3-–-Alexandra&p=2085136#post2085136)

Part 4 – Hiro (http://www.rtsoft.com/forums/showthread.php?294658-The-Odd-Bunch-Part-4-–-Hiro&p=2126555#post2126555)

I shall edit this as I write more parts to the story. So, like read it, or don't. Abuse me, or don't. I'm doing this for the attention I receive!
Love y'all, fam.

BioTestificate
12-23-2015, 08:49 AM
I'll delete this bump when I get some abuse.

What if you don't get an abuse?

GummiBear64
12-23-2015, 08:57 AM
What if you don't get an abuse?

Then it will not get deleted, so, abuse me and/or my story.

Punch
12-23-2015, 09:35 AM
I though japanese are white, meh.

GummiBear64
12-23-2015, 10:58 AM
I though japanese are white, meh.

Uhh, okay? I do not understand what you are trying to say.

GummiBear64
12-23-2015, 02:11 PM
Added Part 3.

Please, compliment, criticise, abuse, advice, whatever you want.
Just read, thanks.

GummiBear64
12-25-2015, 11:01 AM
This series will be on hiatus until next year possibly seeing as Christmas and my sister's birthday.
There might be another one or two if I get time.

Hans
12-25-2015, 09:24 PM
Part 4 - Baeliandro ;)

GummiBear64
12-26-2015, 01:03 AM
Part 4 - Baeliandro ;)

I'm not get it bae?

|ThyLuigi|
12-26-2015, 04:27 AM
wannabe hakma

GummiBear64
12-26-2015, 04:49 AM
wannabe hakma

hakma wannabe me

|ThyLuigi|
12-26-2015, 05:00 AM
hakma wannabe me

lord hakma is above such a measly peasant

ianCSzz
12-26-2015, 05:01 AM
Thanks, you're a hiro!

GummiBear64
12-26-2015, 07:31 AM
lord hakma is above such a measly peasant

Don't be a liar. Hakma looks up to me for he is a master epic smurf.


Thanks, you're a hiro!

I know. I'm always a hiro.

Hans
12-26-2015, 09:55 AM
I'm not get it bae?

but bae :,(

GummiBear64
12-26-2015, 10:04 AM
but bae :,(

Bae don't cry, if you cry, I cry.

Hans
12-26-2015, 10:09 AM
Bae don't cry, if you cry, I cry.

don't worry bae, if your happy, im happy ::::))))))

GummiBear64
12-27-2015, 02:35 AM
I need criticism and abuse, pity the Master Smurf has not responded.

|ThyLuigi|
12-27-2015, 02:53 AM
I need criticism and abuse, pity the Master Smurf has not responded.

I'm not master smurf, but...

There's 3 parts for 3 characters, but I don't care about any of them, and if you introduce more characters consecutively I'll probably hope they all fall down an endless pit.

GummiBear64
12-27-2015, 03:59 AM
I'm not master smurf, but...

There's 3 parts for 3 characters, but I don't care about any of them, and if you introduce more characters consecutively I'll probably hope they all fall down an endless pit.

It's ok, I may only introduce one more character and then focus on those four for a little while.

GummiBear64
01-04-2016, 03:48 AM
If I don't write the next part in the next three days, abuse me so I don't forget.

|ThyLuigi|
01-04-2016, 11:11 PM
If I don't write the next part in the next three days, abuse me so I don't forget.

Will it be about some insignificant character that is supposed to make some difference in the world because he/she's a special snowflake? I bet it is.

GummiBear64
01-04-2016, 11:14 PM
Will it be about some insignificant character that is supposed to make some difference in the world because he/she's a special snowflake? I bet it is.

don't mock my story, I'll break you. :cry:

|ThyLuigi|
01-04-2016, 11:19 PM
don't mock my story, I'll break you. :cry:

Not before I fall into a pit of boredom after reading another excerpt.
Aboose

GummiBear64
01-04-2016, 11:24 PM
Not before I fall into a pit of boredom after reading another excerpt.
Aboose

IF YOU DONT LIKE IT DONT READ YOU UNGRATEFUL TWERP!
ILL HAVE YOU KNOW THAT ONE OF THESE DAYS I WILL BECOME A FAMOUS AUTHOR AND YOU SHALL REGRET THE DAY YOU SAID MY EXCERPTS WERE BORING!

|ThyLuigi|
01-04-2016, 11:28 PM
IF YOU DONT LIKE IT DONT READ YOU UNGRATEFUL TWERP!
ILL HAVE YOU KNOW THAT ONE OF THESE DAYS I WILL BECOME A FAMOUS AUTHOR AND YOU SHALL REGRET THE DAY YOU SAID MY EXCERPTS WERE BORING!

You gotta know how to be an author before you become a famous one, therefor I'll never regret such a thing.

GummiBear64
01-04-2016, 11:31 PM
You gotta know how to be an author before you become a famous one, therefor I'll never regret such a thing.

fine ill discontinue this series so you can be a happy twerp you little u grateful git.
ill never forgive you

|ThyLuigi|
01-04-2016, 11:33 PM
fine ill discontinue this series so you can be a happy twerp you little u grateful git.
ill never forgive you
I gotta get something to read while waiting for hakma's masterpeices, keep writing. ;)

GummiBear64
01-04-2016, 11:36 PM
I gotta get something to read while waiting for hakma's masterpeices, keep writing. ;)

You know what, I'm sick of you badmouthing me like I'm some underclass peasant. You will treat me the same as you treat everyone else that isn't Lord Hakma. With respect!
And you will start doing so now.

GummiBear64
01-04-2016, 11:39 PM
Do I have to make a thread or will you tell me who exactly is hakma? Thanks.

I want a full description.

:whistling:

Hakma is the alt account of GBAGamer whom is the alt account of Airtaters. Lord Hakma is worshipped by many whom like to call themselves Hakmarians. Hakma is our lord and saviour.

|ThyLuigi|
01-05-2016, 12:08 AM
You know what, I'm sick of you badmouthing me like I'm some underclass peasant. You will treat me the same as you treat everyone else that isn't Lord Hakma. With respect!
And you will start doing so now.

you asked for abuse. :rolleyes:

GummiBear64
01-05-2016, 12:13 AM
you asked for abuse. :rolleyes:

Ok no more abuse, give honest opinion.
You're forbidden from abuse.

|ThyLuigi|
01-05-2016, 12:18 AM
Ok no more abuse, give honest opinion.
You're forbidden from abuse.

Honest opinion...<Evil laughs in the distant>


Not anything special, in fact, it's quite boring and I think anyone else to read it is most likely forsaken to the second layer of hell due to the fact that it's basically 3 people's thoughts of things that happened, and they all seem quite unrelated.

GummiBear64
01-05-2016, 12:20 AM
Honest opinion...<Evil laughs in the distant>


Not anything special, in fact, it's quite boring and I think anyone else to read it is most likely forsaken to the second layer of hell due to the fact that it's basically 3 people's thoughts of things that happened, and they all seem quite unrelated.

Okokokok sugar coat it

|ThyLuigi|
01-05-2016, 12:20 AM
Okokokok sugar coat it

Your writing is so fab and anyone who reads it isn't forsaken to hell.

_Lennart_
01-05-2016, 12:21 AM
You need abuse. Here is your abuse.

Your stories are :poop: even though I have not read them. I propose you better than Hakma as he is the false lord. Lord Lenin is the one we praise. Go beat Hakma and show him Lord Lenin > Peasent Hakma.

GummiBear64
01-05-2016, 12:26 AM
Your writing is so fab and anyone who reads it isn't forsaken to hell.
Thanks, I thought you were serious about it being bad. Yay!

You need abuse. Here is your abuse.

Your stories are :poop: even though I have not read them. I propose you better than Hakma as he is the false lord. Lord Lenin is the one we praise. Go beat Hakma and show him Lord Lenin > Peasent Hakma.

I'm... What?
Lord Hakma is the only lord.

GummiBear64
01-05-2016, 12:52 PM
Added part 4. Quite frankly, I'm not sure if I'll continue this, it seems it isn't as good as I was anticipating originally.

_Lennart_
01-05-2016, 12:56 PM
Thanks, I thought you were serious about it being bad. Yay!


I'm... What?
Lord Hakma is the only lord.

Traitor. I will have you follow the ways of Lord Lenin.

GummiBear64
01-05-2016, 12:58 PM
Traitor. I will have you follow the ways of Lord Lenin.

Now now, calm down. This thread is about my story, if you want to attack me, let's take this into Dink Smallw---no, that will not do, that's my solitary confinement.

Hmm...lets take this into a random thread.

Please, don't.

_Lennart_
01-05-2016, 01:00 PM
Now now, calm down. This thread is about my story, if you want to attack me, let's take this into Dink Smallw---no, that will not do, that's my solitary confinement.

Hmm...lets take this into a random thread.

Please, don't.

I rate your stories 5/7.

GummiBear64
01-05-2016, 01:02 PM
I rate your stories 5/7.

I feel as if it is terrible compared to my original plan which was "think as I write."
I'll probably quit this one and just do a different story or no story at all.

_Lennart_
01-05-2016, 01:06 PM
I feel as if it is terrible compared to my original plan which was "think as I write."
I'll probably quit this one and just do a different story or no story at all.

Don't quit and I'll read them, mk?

GummiBear64
01-14-2016, 12:00 PM
If I don't get another part up, in say, a week, I'll owe everyone who has gave criticism or said "lol good story xd" a free WL.

|ThyLuigi|
01-14-2016, 11:57 PM
If I don't get another part up, in say, a week, I'll owe everyone who has gave criticism or said "lol good story xd" a free WL.

;)))))))))))))

SilversoulX
01-15-2016, 12:11 AM
Ugh, the title makes me think of "The Shady Bunch"

Metalwire
01-15-2016, 12:13 AM
Ugh, the title makes me think of "The Brady Bunch"
I love that show

GummiBear64
01-15-2016, 05:16 AM
Ugh, the title makes me think of "The Shady Bunch"

And The Brady Bunch.

GummiBear64
01-28-2016, 11:40 AM
IVE GOT TO REMEMBER TO WRITE

BioTestificate
01-28-2016, 11:51 AM
I'll delete this bump when I get some abuse.

It's already on page 3; aren't there any abuses here?

Hans
01-28-2016, 11:58 AM
If I don't get another part up, in say, a week, I'll owe everyone who has gave criticism or said "lol good story xd" a free WL.

lol good story xd

GummiBear64
01-28-2016, 12:03 PM
It's already on page 3; aren't there any abuses here?
I forgot about it. Don't abuse me.

lol good story xd

You're too late. I'm already ten world locks in debt. I lost count, was it twelve?

|ThyLuigi|
01-29-2016, 11:01 PM
I can't wait for the acknowledgements section...


"Thank you all for waiting 27.5 years for the end of the book. Sadly, however, it's publishing was denied. I'd like to thank ThyLuigi, Hakma, Airtaters, GBAGamer, MidasTouch..."