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Metalwire
12-29-2015, 02:47 AM
The First by Metalwire



Metalwire: Well today is a wonderful day to farm ( starts farming pinballs and sugar cane and ends up with 50000 gems)
Metalwire: Now let's buy that dragon I always......
(Defuse Entered 2 others here)
Defuse: *gasps* I need you help please
Metalwire: ?.... What is it?
Defuse:*gasps* SOMEONE MURDERED ELECTRODREAM!!
Metalwire: are you serious?
Defuse: Yes meet me at TheFirst
Metalwire: k
(Defuse and Metalwire 2 others here)
Areodax: Metal finally you came we have Electro's dead body and it won't respawn
Metalwire: That's very odd
Defuse: What do we do?
Metalwire: We have to Unite the Forumers and discuss this
Areodax: Agreed
(Lyve and Gamer381 enter 4 others here)
(Areodax tells the story to gamer and lyve and tells everyone to reunite at start and gather as many forumers)
Metalwire: wait before we leave read this sign
(Everyone reads)
THE FIRST
Areodax: ??
Metalwire: we should get going
(Everyone meets up at start)
AlexKat:Hi guys!!
Metalwire: no time we must discuss this at once
Areodax: I don't get it who would do this
Lyve: Amaturez?
Metalwire: Maybe but it could be one of us
Gamer381: But were all trusted right?
Metalwire: who knows
(GLOBAL SERVER MESSAGE:HE RETURNED)
(Everyone questions in confusion)
Metalwire: ....
(ThyLuigi enters 6 others here)
Thyluigi: guys we must get out START is going to reset
TO BE CONTINUED........ :) Hint 1 : J

Epicbrick
12-29-2015, 02:49 AM
The First by Metalwire



Metalwire: Well today is a wonderful day to farm ( starts farming pinballs and sugar cane and ends up with 50000 gems)
Metalwire: Now let's buy that dragon I always......
(Defuse Entered 2 others here)
Defuse: *gasps* I need you help please
Metalwire: ?.... What is it?
Defuse:*gasps* SOMEONE MURDERED ELECTRODREAM!!
Metalwire: are you serious?
Defuse: Yes meet me at TheFirst
Metalwire: k
(Defuse and Metalwire 2 others here)
Areodax: Metal finally you came we have Electro's dead body and it won't respawn
Metalwire: That's very odd
Defuse: What do we do?
Metalwire: We have to Unite the Forumers and discuss this
Areodax: Agreed
(Lyve and Gamer381 enter 4 others here)
(Areodax tells the story to gamer and lyve and tells everyone to reunite at start and gather as many forumers)
Metalwire: wait before we leave read this sign
(Everyone reads)
THE FIRST
Areodax: ??
Metalwire: we should get going
(Everyone meets up at start)
AlexKat:Hi guys!!
Metalwire: no time we must discuss this at once
Areodax: I don't get it who would do this
Lyve: Amaturez?
Metalwire: Maybe but it could be one of us
Gamer381: But were all trusted right?
Metalwire: who knows
(GLOBAL SERVER MESSAGE:HE RETURNED)
(Everyone questions in confusion)
Metalwire: ....
(ThyLuigi enters 6 others here)
Thyluigi: guys we must get out START is going to reset
TO BE CONTINUED........ :) Hint 1 : J

Font to big, It makes it look like your trying to hide the fact that part one is very short.
Jk but seriously why is the font so big
Yellow is too hard to see
Most of these are problems with the text not the story lol

Metalwire
12-29-2015, 02:50 AM
Font to big, It makes it look like your trying to hide the fact that part one is very short.
Jk but seriously why is the font so big
Yellow is too hard to see
Most of these are problems with the text not the story lol
Lol I messed up cause im currently using iPhone I made the font big so it can be clear to see

GummiBear64
12-29-2015, 02:51 AM
I suggest you make the font smaller and remove the colours. It's just a suggestion so don't kill me and things.

Epicbrick
12-29-2015, 02:52 AM
ThyLuigi does a better job on criticizing the actual story so.
Where is he?

GummiBear64
12-29-2015, 02:55 AM
ThyLuigi does a better job on criticizing the actual story so.
Where is he?

No, he abuses the writer like him and the writer are in an abusive relationship.

Valory xD
12-29-2015, 03:00 AM
lel nice fanfic

Metalwire
12-29-2015, 03:00 AM
No, he abuses the writer like him and the writer are in an abusive relationship.
Please reword this it confuses me

JzoneGamer
12-29-2015, 03:03 AM
Wat? Pinballs are farmables? I thought u can only play with em' at the arcade? Gems? Woah, you're rich dude! You can sell em' for a few million dollars! Eh? Leave START? Wats teh "Global System"? I'm so confused. :rolleyes:

Metalwire
12-29-2015, 03:08 AM
Wat? Pinballs are farmables? I thought u can only play with em' at the arcade? Gems? Woah, you're rich dude! You can sell em' for a few million dollars! Eh? Leave START? Wats teh "Global System"? I'm so confused. :rolleyes:
It's that message that pops up saying Global server Message in the chat box as a broadcast to every player when the server restarts or updates

JzoneGamer
12-29-2015, 03:20 AM
It's that message that pops up saying Global server Message in the chat box as a broadcast to every player when the server restarts or updates That awkward moment when sarcasm wasn't noticed. :p

GummiBear64
12-29-2015, 03:22 AM
Please reword this it confuses me
ThyLuigi abuses the writer. He acts as if both people; the writer and Luigi, are in an abusive relationship.

It's that message that pops up saying Global server Message in the chat box as a broadcast to every player when the server restarts or updates
He used sarcasm because wrong sub forum.

Metalwire
12-29-2015, 03:28 AM
That awkward moment when sarcasm wasn't noticed. :p
Lol screw you