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GummiBear64
01-12-2016, 03:15 AM
So, like four years ago, I had this story that I started to write and was really proud of. I found it in my emails somehow so I decided to read it. Needless to say, cringes ensued.
It won't allow me to coy it so I have to show it to you in the form of screenshots.
I wrote it like four years ago so your abuse doesn't bother me.
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syrup
01-12-2016, 03:18 AM
But uh, when does it take place?

not saying that it was bad but i mean when

GummiBear64
01-12-2016, 11:27 AM
But uh, when does it take place?

not saying that it was bad but i mean when
I wrote it four years ago, give me a break.

You're a great writer, if writing interests you, keep doing it.
Nah, most my stories are generic and cringeworthy.

xlightswitch
01-12-2016, 12:16 PM
There are many errors in your story, grammar/punctuation/sentence structure-wise.

For example, the word 'Ok' should be spelled as 'Okay'. You need to put some commas in certain places, for example, "In gloomy night of the forest, a blah blah blah," not, "In the gloomy night of the forest a blah blah blah".

Sorry, but I just couldn't help it. :rolleyes:

GummiBear64
01-12-2016, 12:18 PM
There are many errors in your story, grammar/punctuation/sentence structure-wise.

For example, the word 'Ok' should be spelled as 'Okay'. You need to put some commas in certain places, for example, "In gloomy night of the forest, a blah blah blah," not, "In the gloomy night of the forest a blah blah blah".

Sorry, but I just couldn't help it. :rolleyes:

It was written four years ago when I could not care less about grammar and punctuation.
However, it does not really matter as to how one spells OK as either way both ways mean the exact same thing.

Its Daniel
01-12-2016, 12:19 PM
Am I the only one who hates reading


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Haven't read it but its good :rolleyes:

xlightswitch
01-12-2016, 12:19 PM
It was written four years ago when I could not care less about grammar and punctuation.
However, it does not really matter as to how one spells OK as either way both ways mean the exact same thing.
Yeah, but "okay" seems more formal compared to "ok".

Spearman176
01-12-2016, 12:20 PM
*** did i just read

GummiBear64
01-12-2016, 12:22 PM
Am I the only one who hates reading


without



spa





ces




?


Haven't read it but its good :rolleyes:
There are spaces, are there not?
I'm confused as to what you mean.

Yeah, but "okay" seems more formal compared to "ok".
I agree but, once again, I had not a care in the world about my grammar, punctuation or formality.
It is amazing how much can change within four years, is it not?

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*** did i just read

Imagine all of GrateNPowder's posts.
Now imagine an empty book.
Put all of said posts in to said empty book.
That's what you just read.
The Book of Cringe.

Its Daniel
01-12-2016, 12:26 PM
There are spaces, are there not?
I'm confused as to what you mean.

Idk but I just hate it.
Like those scene which they chat.

xlightswitch
01-12-2016, 12:28 PM
I agree but, once again, I had not a care in the world about my grammar, punctuation or formality.
It is amazing how much can change within four years, is it not?
Yeah. 4 years ago I was fat. xd

GummiBear64
01-12-2016, 12:34 PM
Yeah. 4 years ago I was fat. xd

Now you're obese.
:rolleyes:

xlightswitch
01-12-2016, 12:40 PM
Now you're obese.
:rolleyes:
lol hahaha

it's funny cuz it's true






:(

Updated
01-12-2016, 12:57 PM
tldr tldr tldr tldr

GummiBear64
01-13-2016, 01:24 PM
Time to release the cringe.