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    I felt like writing a poem to just release my stress; hope you like it!


    I had always been alone,
    Until the day I decided to,
    Stop the moan and groan.
    I never meant to start a war,
    But people chose it that way.

    They went against me,
    Laughed at me,
    And made me feel sick.
    I knew my place,
    Yet I wanted to fight back.

    I never found the light,
    Yet Growtopia guided me out the night,
    Into the underworld of scams,
    Greed,
    Hate,
    And drama.

    Few have reached out,
    And everyone else continued,
    To bully and make me feel alone.
    They try to put me in my place,
    Back to being alone.
    They spread rumors about me,
    Which makes me hopeless and fearful.

    My studies have went down under,
    The pressure crawling,
    Creeping towards me,
    And I fell.

    Terrible things have happened,
    Though I know better,
    I felt like I lost it,
    By it I mean by childhood.
    For my wisdom people teased me,
    Laughed,
    Punched.

    I am still neutral on my feelings,
    Though the emotions are eating me up inside.
    I feel like I'm falling deep,
    In what those have called middle school.
    They say it's so easy,
    But it is so bashful.
    It's seperating friends and making foes,
    And I'm trying...

    Trying....

    Trying....

    Trying to get away from the fear,
    Anxiety,
    Threats,
    Bashfullness,
    Bitterness,
    Pain,
    And the past.


    Thank you for reading. This helped me little to uplift my mixed emotions right now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tohru View Post
    I felt like writing a poem to just release my stress; hope you like it!


    I had always been alone,
    Until the day I decided to,
    Stop the moan and groan.
    I never meant to start a war,
    But people chose it that way.

    They went against me,
    Laughed at me,
    And made me feel sick.
    I knew my place,
    Yet I wanted to fight back.

    I never found the light,
    Yet Growtopia guided me out the night,
    Into the underworld of scams,
    Greed,
    Hate,
    And drama.

    Few have reached out,
    And everyone else continued,
    To bully and make me feel alone.
    They try to put me in my place,
    Back to being alone.
    They spread rumors about me,
    Which makes me hopeless and fearful.

    My studies have went down under,
    The pressure crawling,
    Creeping towards me,
    And I fell.

    Terrible things have happened,
    Though I know better,
    I felt like I lost it,
    By it I mean by childhood.
    For my wisdom people teased me,
    Laughed,
    Punched.

    I am still neutral on my feelings,
    Though the emotions are eating me up inside.
    I feel like I'm falling deep,
    In what those have called middle school.
    They say it's so easy,
    But it is so bashful.
    It's seperating friends and making foes,
    And I'm trying...

    Trying....

    Trying....

    Trying to get away from the fear,
    Anxiety,
    Threats,
    Bashfullness,
    Bitterness,
    Pain,
    And the past.


    Thank you for reading. This helped me little to uplift my mixed emotions right now.
    Powerful, agonizing, mixed, salted, kind, relatable

    Words that describe how I feel about this poem

    Thx Snowcookie
    Do great things in the past, and you'll get a good future.


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    Thank you; every positive comment helps me to feel better about myself. I had a bad day today, so I felt like writing this would help me feel much better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tohru View Post
    Thank you; every positive comment helps me to feel better about myself. I had a bad day today, so I felt like writing this would help me feel much better.
    I had a bad weekend

    there was a chickenpox outbreak at school
    And I thoight I had the ch7ckens pox

    but I had spiderbites and I had a serious alergic reaction


    ,...I think the chickenpox should have been a better ailement ;-;

    Thx Snowcookie
    Do great things in the past, and you'll get a good future.


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    I cri for you link.

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    Thank you for writing this poem for me! *troll face appears

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    Haha, funny! ^^^^

    I hope more people see this to understand the true negativities of life.

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